People generally leave their communities for work in other countries. Give advantages and disadvantages and any example you have faced.
For better professional opportunities, people are force by their country's worse economic circumstances to live in other part of the world. Settlement in a strange place is always a tough job but it also have some benefits as well and I will discuss both aspects.
Moving abroad can be beneficial if you get opportunity to live and work in a well developed country like United Kingdom or Canada where best facilities of health, infrastructure and education are provided for their residents. Another advantage is the strong rule of law that ensures peaceful life for country's inhabitants and it is the top most prioritized thing that one should consider before relocation. Finally, education system of the western world is far more superior than third world countries and anyone who moves towards these countries, will secure better literacy not only for him but for his next generation as well.
There are, however, some problems as well, one is cultural differences that can be a big challenge for adjusting in a entirely strange environment. Another negative point is that if you are living without your family in a country like UK, you have to do all your routine works by yourself and the cost of living in such country would not allow you to hire a servant for your regular home works. Further, It can be bit tough to compete with local people for getting desired job because local people are well aware of their country and they have good links and relations as well and it may reduce your chances of getting perfect job in abroad.
In conclusion, moving in other country leaving your friends and family behind can be very difficult but in the end you will definitely be benefited by the opportunities that your hard work deserves.
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- Without capital punishment (the death penalty) our lives are less secure and crimes of violence increase. Capital punishment is essential to control violence in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 76
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'has'?
Suggestion: has
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Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'where the best'.
Suggestion: where the best
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Message: The adjective more is normally used with to and does not need 'more' (so called implicit comparative). Probably you need to write: 'superior to'.
Suggestion: superior to
...tion system of the western world is far more superior than third world countries and anyone who mo...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, may, so, third, well, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1449.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87878787879 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66176470174 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589225589226 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 44.3496210682 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 161.0 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.0 20.7667163134 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.55555555556 7.06120827912 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.202172553635 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0847269996988 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0372042166954 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125499611121 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0156870861982 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.1 13.0946893788 138% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.98 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.2 11.3001002004 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.62 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.68 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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