People today can perform everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions without meeting others face to face. What are the effects it may have on individuals and society as a whole? Is it a positive or negative development?
The modern world has experienced considerable change since the advent of the Internet. While many have enjoyed the undeniably convenient features for daily life that it has created, it should be stressed that the overall impact of this growing revolutionized technology trend has two aspects.
The commendable features and imperfect points of this heated question will be thoroughly examined as follows.
First and foremost, the detrimental effects of the internet are the ground that people argue against this technological invention.
The first and perhaps the most significant detrimental effect is the possible danger of social isolation that originates from the explosion growth of indirect communication via Internet.
Obviously, heavily relying on digital activity leads internet users becoming an “Internetaholic”, and in the long run, they unconsciously fade out from social interaction.
Secondly, without any face to face contact, it is difficult for human to transmit persuasion and intuitive feelings and gain trust from each other, as the result, the society would turn out to be soulless and inhumanity without any personal interaction.
Nevertheless, there is incontrovertible evidence that extraordinary technical and scientific achievement has revolutionized the way contemporary world communicates and progress.
The remarkable feature of the Internet technology including email, discussion forums, online conversation, ecommerce and online shopping provide us with the most considerable benefits and considered as a perfect instrument of connection around the world at reasonable price.
It is undoubtedly true to say that both of our love ones in faraway places are greatly facilitated by these necessary and powerful communication tools.
Also, it should be noted that other business aspects such as global and international trading areas have been becoming dramatically convenient thanks to the advent of the internet.
This successful technical innovation offers us innumerable opportunities for international transaction processes and commercial activities such as tremendously prompts business prospect searching and provides possible payment gateway for foreign exchange without huge investment in several physical business trips and meetings.
To recapitulate, Internet with the excellence amenities that it offered human being a position of strength in the evolutionary development of the modern world.
Provided that the authority should have effective method for management and realistic and brilliant plan to support the sustainable growth of this technology invention, the modern society will significantly benefit from this strategic hi-technological priority.
- In many countries, more and more young people are unable to find jobs after graduation. What problems do you think youth unemployment will cause to the individual and society? What can be done to cope with this problem? 89
- People today can perform everyday tasks such as shopping, banking or even business transactions without meeting others face to face. What are the effects it may have on individuals and society as a whole? Is it a positive or negative development? 89
- In many less developed countries, the gap in the standard of living between the city and countryside is very large. What are the reasons? How could the gap be reduced? 89
- Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced? 84
- Schooling is no longer necessary, since more and more information is accessible on the Internet, and students can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 53, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 21.0 8.3376753507 252% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2337.0 1615.20841683 145% => OK
No of words: 382.0 315.596192385 121% => OK
Chars per words: 6.11780104712 5.12529762239 119% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.42095241839 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.42383659066 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 231.0 176.041082164 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.604712041885 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 729.9 506.74238477 144% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.8400307822 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 166.928571429 106.682146367 156% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2857142857 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78571428571 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123815242384 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0373520674364 0.084324248473 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431129728219 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.040008416402 0.151304729494 26% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0435370446978 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 21.0 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 18.69 50.2224549098 37% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.4 11.3001002004 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.51 12.4159519038 149% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.89 8.58950901804 127% => OK
difficult_words: 143.0 78.4519038076 182% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 9.78957915832 128% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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