Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Household and industrial waste are becoming all-pervasive in this contemporary world than ever before.
In this essay, the writer has intention to delve in determining the contributory factors as well as propose the appropriate remedies for the challenging question of reducing social garbage and preserving our living conditions from the authority and environmental perspectives.
There are various underlying motives involve in the increasing both local and business rubbish and in the changes of human modern living behaviors and conditions.
The most frequent cause to be considered is the explosive demand of fossil energy sources served for domestic transportation and industrial production purposes.
Apparently, the manufacturing process involved in producing these natural resources such as oils and gas has dramatically ejected large amount of industrial waste to the earth. As the result, continuously expansion of this industry could result in several environmental destruction namely enormous damage to ecosystem and serious form of pollution or contamination to soil and water resources.
Another factor that has equal impact is that the modern civilized society heavily relies on ready to consume consumer products instead of trying to make or create their own from natural ingredients or recyclable materials.
It is undeniable fact that the fast-moving consumer goods industry has significantly impacted to our living condition and deliberately attempted to shape our lifestyle’s pattern.
Although, purchasing packaged goods is advantageous and convenience, the expenses involve in excessive usage of this stuff to the earth place an increased burden on society in general and local community in particular.
In order to elaborate the above-mentioned root causes, there are certain of constructive suggestion that should be considered.
First and importantly, the policy of using fuel-efficient cars and appliances – a cure-all for the burning issue, should be put in practice with the serious and solid support from the authority and local manufacturers.
Research and development investment in producing hybrid vehicles, or industrial and household machines powered by renewable green energy sources should be encouraged and enlarge.
One further method is that people should reduce purchasing non-essential household products and try to recycle as much as they can, resulting in the decrease in domestic rubbish discharge to the environment
To recapitulate, the explosion of domestic and business garbage raises tough challenges and likely to be unmanageable in this modern society, I hold the belief that this urgent modern matter can be resolved provided that the authority along with locals have effective method for management as well as realistic, brilliant green movement and environmental friendly plans to protect our mother nature.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 12, column 207, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, so, well, in general, in particular, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 28.0 10.4138276553 269% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2460.0 1615.20841683 152% => OK
No of words: 422.0 315.596192385 134% => OK
Chars per words: 5.82938388626 5.12529762239 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.53239876712 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.20476582957 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 248.0 176.041082164 141% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587677725118 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 773.1 506.74238477 153% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 120.410835188 49.4020404114 244% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 189.230769231 106.682146367 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.4615384615 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 13.0 4.38176352705 297% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0865026477046 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0274830886288 0.084324248473 33% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0274179316105 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0288247138754 0.151304729494 19% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274674076706 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.3 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 22.08 50.2224549098 44% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.1 11.3001002004 160% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 17.13 12.4159519038 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.99 8.58950901804 128% => OK
difficult_words: 154.0 78.4519038076 196% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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