Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
Recently, increasing amount of waste is disposed every day. This is happening because of the discounted amount on consumable products in supermarket, which human beings tend to buy. Governments shall implement a purchase limit on such products for an individual person.
Ample amount of waste is increasing day by day because people buy cheapest food products that are in a value pack of 3. By this, they tend to purchase more quantities instead of a required consumable quantity. However, men and women do not consume all of that and as a result, remaining items are been trashed. For example, a survey conducted by City times disclosed that, in the year 2007, 48,000 pounds of garbage was collected from Amsterdam city alone. To be particular, 12,000 pounds were of chicken drumsticks of a popular poultry brand called Fresh Foods, this is because they sell their items in a pack of 3.
Increasing number of wastage could be reduced with the help of government by implementing a limit to buy products. This is to say, if a government could introduce a rule where only one item is permitted to per individual, it would reduce the rate of wastage. For example, the garbage collection rate of Muncipal administration of China has drastically decreased their food wastage garbage from 35% to 4% when compared to last 5 years. This is because they implemented a strict law of purchasing decent amount of eatables per individual across supermarkets.
To conclude, wastage is being growing immensely. This is because food items are easily available for people to purchase from a market at discounted rate and to resolve this local administrators should implement per person rule. This will permit an individual to purchase only limited items of such products from supermarket and wastage will not be a concern.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 63, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'buy the cheapest'.
Suggestion: buy the cheapest
...is increasing day by day because people buy cheapest food products that are in a value pack ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1517.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 300.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05666666667 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87342420583 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.553333333333 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.0120701033 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.133333333 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.73333333333 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.111682741391 0.244688304435 46% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0418957672624 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0316206365445 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0724251026647 0.151304729494 48% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0211472347011 0.056905535591 37% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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