Nowadays we are producing more and more rubbish. Why do you think this is happening? What can governments do to help reduce the amount of rubbish produced?
In the present scenario the quantity of wastes are drastically increased and it creates damaging impact on the environment. I believe that there are number of sources which produces rubbish. In order to improve this situation a joint action by government as well as General public is essential.
In my view, most of the rubbish come from medical field because hospitals and dispensaries dump their products in the open fields without undergoing any process of vanishing or reuse it.This just happens due to non- implementation of effective laws relating to disposal of bio-medical wastes and lack of punishment provided to rule
breakers. Apart from that, other major sector of throwing rubbish is the educational institutions, they throw large amount of papers that used by staff members and students. Thousands of papers went to the bin every year and they donot utilise used paper in an effecint manner. Moreover, household unnecessary things to be put into randomly which lead to cause foul smell for passer-by. All the above mentioned wastes destroys the environment and spread variety of disease among urban and local areas.
The situation has become grimful day by day with untreated wastes. I think government has well equipped machinery and advanced technology to deal with such situation and helpful for cleaning the atmosphere. For the recycling and reuse of wastes, biodegradable plants should be established and harsh penalties should be imposed upon those who violates legal norms.
To conclude, to control and reuse of rubbish is not a easy task and it's removal has direct connection with sincere efforts of individuals and local authorities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, well, apart from, as well as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 265.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27169811321 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03470204552 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80467493574 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.679245283019 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 432.9 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.7607020862 49.4020404114 141% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.416666667 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0833333333 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.5 7.06120827912 64% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.113969826263 0.244688304435 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0399770418011 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.051720452434 0.0667982634062 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0582653558364 0.151304729494 39% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0331642714377 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.