The number of crimes is increasing, which makes people feel anxious wherever they are. This trend can be attributed to a number of factors and this essay will present possible solutions to overcome this situation.
First, when it comes to going out, this insecurity approaches an increase in unemployment in many parts of the World. In recent years, the economic situation of some developing countries such as Vietnam and India has undergone great changes. Specifically, the epidemic caused a supply bottleneck that forced many businesses to close. Bankruptey businesses cause millions of people to lose their jobs, resulting in them being under a lot of financial pressure. This may force some mentally ill people to have false thoughts such as home attacks and burglary. According to statistics from Harvard University in the US in recent years, up to 40% of graduates are unemployed and the youth crime rate has increased rapidly. In order to avoid negative effects, the government needs to introduce policies to solve unemployment problems such as reducing taxes and creating favorable conditions for businesses to encourage stable development. At the same time, people need to raise their awareness and avoid being affected by bad influences such as regularly updating the situation.
Second, the feeling of insecurity even at home is people's perception of negative information posted on social media. Today, violence occurs in many places and the media is always updated so that we can learn from the question. However, the reality of young people goes against that desire. A good example is in Vietnam, now there are a lot of murders because of some unwanted issues in love like quarreling with each other. During that time, on Facebook, there were many status posts with the content of "the world is scary." This shows that everyone is affected by a lot of bad information because the government needs to tighten network security and encourage people to choose facts filters.
In summary, fear has arisen among individuals no matter where they are, it is important to find a solution to maintain a daily routine without additional obstacles and difficulties as people do not just need to stay at home but also go out.
- In some countries young people are encouraged to work or travel for a year between finishing high school and starting university Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of taking a gap year before starting university 73
- In many parts of the world children and teenagers are committing more crimes Why is this happening How should they be punished 78
- Families who send their children to private schools should not be required to pay taxes that support the state education system To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement 56
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 84
- Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online Is this a positive or negative development 78
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1397260274 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75279894751 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5906007545 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186942569002 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559382323998 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490019198291 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115048683938 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320768877849 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, may, second, so, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1876.0 1615.20841683 116% => OK
No of words: 365.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1397260274 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75279894751 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 597.6 506.74238477 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.5906007545 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.25 106.682146367 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8125 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.1875 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186942569002 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0559382323998 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0490019198291 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115048683938 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0320768877849 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.83 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.