People today increasingly use credit cards to make monthly purchases.
Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Since the technologies made a step beyond our imagination of the world, people have started to pay by cards faster and more convenient. However, in today’s society humans commenced to use those cards everyday for anything that a current individual wants to buy. Although, there some disadvantages of using credit cards, I strongly believe that advantages overweigh drawbacks of this payment method.
Firstly, the primary benefit of using current payment mode is that a person does not require taking cash when that individual is going somewhere outside. Therefore, it is really simply to take your credit card and go shopping without abundant amount of money in wallet. In other words, a person cannot take a lot of money with you in your wallet, and with a plastic card there can be any amount. For example, when a person buys an expensive car, they can't pay with cash, because it's a lot of money and it weighs a lot. Hence, cashless payments are the best way to make purchases.
Secondly, the worthiest part of using a plastic card is cyber attacks. It means that if the bank has glitches in its security system this can be used by hackers to create backdoors. Likewise, this type of online theft is very popular nowadays due to the fact that every program has its own holes in the system. For instance, last year, hackers from California broke into one of the largest United States banks and stole millions of dollars from ordinary citizens. Thus, credit cards have their drawbacks, but they are not as significant compared to the advantages. To conclude, I strongly believe that credit cards are the future and without them it would be much more difficult for humanity to live in modern society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 201, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...ety humans commenced to use those cards everyday for anything that a current individual ...
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Line 1, column 249, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'want'?
Suggestion: want
... for anything that a current individual wants to buy. Although, there some disadvanta...
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Line 2, column 452, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...en a person buys an expensive car, they cant pay with cash, because its a lot of mon...
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Line 2, column 480, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...e car, they cant pay with cash, because its a lot of money and it weighs a lot. Hen...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, likewise, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1414.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 292.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84246575342 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13376432452 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51075748955 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 180.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.616438356164 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 443.7 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.3174833753 49.4020404114 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8571428571 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.92857142857 7.06120827912 141% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213261852943 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0706502376179 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0538930026215 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148151537713 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0740079287676 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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