People who have original ideas (e.g people who invent or discover things) are of greater value to society than people who are simply able to copy the ideas of others well.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Certainly without a shadow of doubt, Inventors hold a significant contribution towards the economy because their inventions gave birth to a new lease of discoveries which were of a great value to the society. However, we should not ignore the contribution made by imitators who work tirelessly towards improving and updating these inventions for us.
Firstly, Imagine what the world would be, if we could not have access to the daily use equipment's like electricity bulb and radio. Whenever electricity went off from my house, I used to call the electricity support team and wondered how the old people would have lived their life. All of this would not have been possible without the efforts of Thomas Alva Edison and Graham bell. For example, nowadays electricity bulb is now being used in every part of the country and especially in the rural areas where it provides light to more than 100,00,000 villages in India.Secondly, In the past if people want to travel abroad it takes them months or sometimes even a year to travel but things are different nowadays and it has literally cut down the travelling time to eighteen hours maximum whatever country you go to.
On the other hand, imitator are the ones who has worked behind the scenes to make those discoveries up-to-date for us by making the lives easier for us. This comes quite handy when people are unable to buy original items and are available to consumers for lower prices in their country and that too happens through the efforts of the imitators. Furthermore, every person is not good enough to make updates on the inventions, so it shows the need of imitators in the society.
In conclusion, our society should be thankful to the people who have implemented original ideas but we cannot disregard the efforts of those who have worked constantly towards improvising those discoveries so we can still use them in our life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 568, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Secondly
... more than 100,00,000 villages in India.Secondly, In the past if people want to travel a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, for example, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1575.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90654205607 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66540352068 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595015576324 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 507.6 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Interrogative: 0.0 0.384769539078 0% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 91.2920588003 49.4020404114 185% => OK
Chars per sentence: 157.5 106.682146367 148% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.1 20.7667163134 155% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1 7.06120827912 171% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20919359042 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0684052739585 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581238322089 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121371231292 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0606043147833 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.7 13.0946893788 135% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.79 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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