The percentage of overweight children in western society has increased by almost 20% in the last ten years.
Discuss the causes and effects of this disturbing trend.
The percentage of fatigue children in developed countries has increased by 20% from the last decade. The adolescents became fatty because of unhealthy diet plan which affected their health issues.
To begin with, the youngsters habituated for the food which has less nutrition and heavy carbohydrates. As parents are busy with their work life they are not concentrating on their boys and girls food quality. Sometimes underages are consuming eatables unlimitedly, in addition, they frequently attend the parties and go to restaurants with friends where they eat unhealthy cuisines which are served with cheese, non-vegetarian food and drinks. For instance, in the U.S.A. parents tend to take their underages to pubs and parties where they eat food that contains bad colostral.
Furthermore, juveniles have not followed the healthy food hence it effected on their health. By taking food in abnormal timings and over consuming causes health issues such as heart attack, obesity, and overweight. These health issues impacting on their daily lifestyle where they cannot go to the school regularly and they cannot play with their friends and family members. Due to these health issues, their hospital bills are increased and sometimes few parents cannot afford to pay it because of their financial problems. For example, in the U.K. the boy Stephan has 50 pounds overweight than normal weight for his age and doctors suggested him to undergo surgery where his parent not able to pay the hefty fee.
In conclusion, I reiterate that the share of fat youngsters in well-grown countries has increased by 20% in the last decade due to over-consumption of Unrecommended food which impacts on their well-being.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, if, so, well, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1445.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.33210332103 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79952474827 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560885608856 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3749808693 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.416666667 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5833333333 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.25 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815827226286 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0404425754237 0.084324248473 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0667159828547 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0715467829437 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0540626860694 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.0946893788 115% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.93 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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