At present the media affects people’s lives significantly. What impact does this have on the society? Is it a negative or a positive development?
Media is one of the exorbitant achievements of the technology that have many vital effects in the today's pragmatic world. Currently, the role of media tends to cause some effects in most of our lives. This essay will deal about the various outcomes of the media and also provide my view on the growth of the media with respect to it merits or demerits.
The evolution of the media has a long journey and it has left traces in all the people. From the beginning of the days when media was started till today, people tend to become more aware of the happenings in the world, in other words, the awareness among the public has grown exponentially. Be the media in any form such as newspaper, television, radio or internet the knowledge that these media provide to the public is enormous. Media make people communicate with each other being in different continents. This also helps to know the various global events. However, even though it makes them educated, there are a plethora of circumstances where people are exposed to partiality. Public at times get to know only one side of the happenings. In many situations the media just provide information that is favorable to them. In fact, it sometimes portray news that is redundant or irrelevant. This makes the people to take wrong decisions. For example, there are many advertisements that exposes only the benefits of the product without mentioning its perilous effects. This can even cause remorse effects on public.
From my point of view, I will say the demerits of media outweighs its merits. People are displayed many unwanted and unprofessional contents in the media which kindles their mind to participate in unethical activities such as kidnapping, black mailing and abusing. Many people who intends to involve in these kinds of crime, provide the root cause as the media. In addition, the media also behaves as a cause to take away many lives. Here I like to quote an example that I recently read. The article is about a woman who tried to deliver her baby by watching few videos that she saw online. She neither consulted a doctor nor took any medicines. Ultimately, during her delivery she died due to the excessive blood loss. This death is purely tributed to the belief that she achieved from the media. If she was not influenced by these kind of things, she would be alive.
To recapitulate, there are various advantages and disadvantages that the media provide us, but it is our sole responsibility to take up the good things. Thus in this essay, few points were briefed about the effects of media on our lives.
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, thus, for example, in addition, in fact, kind of, such as, in other words, with respect to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 45.0 24.0651302605 187% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 41.998997996 164% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2146.0 1615.20841683 133% => OK
No of words: 446.0 315.596192385 141% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.81165919283 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5955099915 4.20363070211 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63708396304 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.535874439462 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 693.0 506.74238477 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 27.0 16.0721442886 168% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.4221798336 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.4814814815 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5185185185 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.37037037037 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 11.0 3.4128256513 322% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157671308645 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0446376967392 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0323459665822 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100970245806 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0260041499988 0.056905535591 46% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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