At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people. Do you think that the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?
Nowadays, some nations are primarily comprised of youngsters rather than senior citizens. In my opinion, this era would have about numerous benefits as young people are ambitious, productive and adaptable to breakthrough technologies. However, there are a few shortcomings that should also be taken into account.
To embark upon, young people play a vital role in our society as the majority of the labour workforce is young, and youngness means ambition, they always seek their best, accomplish the allocated tasks with high efficiency and invincible dedication. Therefore, the productivity & financial condition of companies in the market is always in an enduring condition. Furthermore, the young are quick learner which help them to adapt themselves to many innovations in this advanced world, and they are fond of new concepts and ideas, updating news every single minute in order not to be obsolete and also make a contribution to nation's economy.
On the other hand, this trend can negatively impact for several reasons. firstly, it is undenieable that although they are full of strength, enthusiasm, they are also hot-tempered and feverish which leads to plentiful wrong decisions. Lacking experiences and consciousness, they meet many obstacles when they work in the real world, which can result in the loss of money and prestigious. Furthermore, youngsters are involved in many criminal activities because they do not have a proper education or stringent upbringing, So they are facing with many hurdles and If they cannot overcome the hurdles, they will become a victim of criminals and directly or indirectly induce crime.
In conclusion, as per my knowledge, although the young generation has a manifold of the positive impact such as higher productivity at work, adaptability and modern approach, the significant of rich experience from the older generation can not be ignored
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Suggestion: Firstly
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Suggestion:
...experience from the older generation can not be ignored
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1609.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 296.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43581081081 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01185555867 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641891891892 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.9684527449 49.4020404114 160% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.272727273 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.9090909091 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.8181818182 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0811069456375 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0286506021689 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.024975525548 0.0667982634062 37% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.051591348202 0.151304729494 34% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0161760104517 0.056905535591 28% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.6 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.57 12.4159519038 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.1 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 97.0 78.4519038076 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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