Reading books keeps a person’s mind active, whereas watching films and television is passive and does not require a person to use their imagination.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Reading books and watching movies are considered as a source of entertainment and a knowledgeable activity where people can fantasize about their lifestyle and how they can improve it. Reading enhances a person's cognitive skills and decision-making capabilities while watching movies, dramas are considered scripted and adds nothing to a person’s creativity and I completely agree with this argument.
First of all, reading is a habit which should be instilled at a very young age when a child is developing his or her thinking capabilities. Reading demands dedication and those who read with dedication and a purpose develop a solid thinking process and can think out of the box which is very common when compared with the people who are T.V addicts. I have personally seen many changes in myself since I started competing in a reading challenge on “goodreads.com”, it has increased my analytical skills and now I see things with a different perspective which was missing before I started reading. This shows that reading plays a massive role in developing a person’s cognitive skills.
On the other hand, watching movies and shows have no significant impact on a person where they found themselves glued to T.V having learned nothing from a 2 or 1-hour long scripted show. Films and T.V shows have already decided their actors, place of shooting so you just need to sit down and take out your leisure time and watch it. For instance, many people prefer reading books instead of watching its movie because they think that a movie cannot depict exactly from its book in a 1 or 2-hour long show. That is why movies or a T.V show play no part in developing a person’s interpersonal skills.
In conclusion, I strongly advocate that reading is an excellent habit that helps a person stay mentally active, healthy and energetic while one cannot exactly say this about watching a movie or a T.V show as its audience gain nothing from it.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so, still, while, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 10.4138276553 192% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1648.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03975535168 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06394854345 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556574923547 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 500.4 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.806059188 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 149.818181818 106.682146367 140% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.7272727273 20.7667163134 143% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.09090909091 7.06120827912 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212998318974 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0906755085372 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.04469654349 0.0667982634062 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134434953804 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0327657293692 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.26 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.7795591182 158% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.