In recent years children are forced to study even in their leisure time. Is this a good practice? Do you agree or disagree?
Studying is the most important part of a student's life. Even if a student wants to pursue his career in sports, he/she will not get that kind of support as in studies. Everybody wants his child to become an Engineer, Doctor and many more. For this even a genius child who studies at least five to six hours a day and has just one hour free, he is still told to study more. Is this practice correct? Ain't the students being buried under the debt of studies? In today's generations, the people's mentality is such that if a child studies, he is a good child, but if he doesn't, then he is not. If I have to answer the question, then I disagree with the fact that the children should be forced to study in his leisure time and just assemble his life between the algebra of mathematics to the equations of science. Not only the students but every individual need time to refresh his/her mind.
In the end, I would like to say that not every child become the founder of a company, he/she should be allowed to choose his own career and make his life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 42, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...tudying is the most important part of a students life. Even if a student wants to pursue...
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Line 1, column 400, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Ain't
...o study more. Is this practice correct? Aint the students being buried under the deb...
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Line 1, column 485, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'peoples'' or 'people's'?
Suggestion: peoples'; people's
... of studies? In todays generations, the peoples mentality is such that if a child studi...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... studies, he is a good child, but if he doesnt, then he is not. If I have to answer th...
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Message: Use simply 'disagree that'.
Suggestion: disagree that
...f I have to answer the question, then I disagree with the fact that the children should be forced to study ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, still, then, at least, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 846.0 1615.20841683 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 197.0 315.596192385 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.29441624365 5.12529762239 84% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25312103702 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.583756345178 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 261.9 506.74238477 52% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.6286554841 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.6 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.9 7.06120827912 55% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15609890708 0.244688304435 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0679157819842 0.084324248473 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632625936866 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924659709738 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924659709738 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.6 12.4159519038 61% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.38 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 78.4519038076 45% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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