In recent years, the family structure has changed, as well as family roles. What are the changes occurring? Do you think these changes are positive or negative?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Over the years, there is a vast change in the hierarchical structure of the family and the activities of the family members. Lifestyle of the people is one of the example for the transformation in recent years. In my point of view, such modification has both positive and negative impacts.
Firstly, people at the past live in a big family with nearly eleven to twelve members consisting of father, mother, siblings, uncle, aunt and their children and also grand parents. Having too many people in a family creates financial problems which is a negative impact. Everyone goes to work in order to balance the expenses and they do not worry about the income if they have enough background asserts. Another problem which could arise is the arguments between the young and the old people for even a small issue.
On the other hand, people in modern days live in a small family consisting of four members or lower than that. Here, the positive impact is both husband and wife go to work earning more money to save it for the future. However, there are some negative aspects too. For instance, they do not know the traditional culture practised in home during festivals. And sometimes they do not have the time to talk with their family members due to busy schedules. This cold lead to misunderstanding.
In conclusion, the life of people varies from time to time. People prefer to live an independent life. Having a small family is enough for them as nobody can dominate the other.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, so, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1231.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 257.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78988326848 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00390054096 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56283508361 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.587548638132 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 394.2 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.2213248653 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.9375 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0625 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3125 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183431717572 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0603646452389 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0573827399796 0.0667982634062 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126575232572 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0810120502383 0.056905535591 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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