The responsibility of bringing up children should be shared equally between mother and father. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the modern world, both of parents tend to work the same time and earn similar salaries, so they have <span class="hiddenSuggestion" pre="have "></span> equal opportunity for bringing up their children. Therefor both of them have to spend their free time with children and this is the way to grow respectable person. this essay will show the main reasons of it.
Firstly, I suppose that both parents should share the same views on bringing up small members of family. The opinion on each subject must be unanimous. For example, if father punished his son for horrible behavior, mother have to support father and then the boy will understand that both parents are right. The same situation, when both parents praise their child. Seeing at the parents doing the same things, child will be inspired to behave better and to do better things.
Secondly, both parents must teach children what they know well. Each of them have to contribute to education. For instance, mother is good at cooking, or painting. She is able to give her knowledge to daughter or son. In the same time father can teach fixing a car, or doing sport exercises. when I was younger, my mother taught me carrying on pets and plants, and my father showed me how to play football. both of them encouraged me becoming good woman.
Finally, the members of family have to have quality time. it can be going to museums, concerts or going on holiday together. In this time child can learn new things and opportunities, how he will be able to spend time in the future. For example, spending time on travelling together can inspire children to become free person and to plan new travelling themselves.
In conclusion, both adults have to spend equal time with their children in the order to contribute to their bringing up. it will help to raise more independent, self-confident, respectable person with strong personal view and so to give them more possibilities to become success man or woman.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, well, for example, for instance, i suppose, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1653.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 335.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93432835821 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27820116611 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06335566285 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.516417910448 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 486.9 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5113066863 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.7142857143 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.9523809524 20.7667163134 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 7.06120827912 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169419785913 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476895652649 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0452791627769 0.0667982634062 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092723792702 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0386240191938 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 13.0946893788 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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