Some people believe that the Olympics games do not have a role in 21st Century. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include examples from your experience.
Currently? activity and sports are playing significant role in human life. sports events such us olympic games involve millions people. However there is opinion, that at this time it is not important for society. I do not agree with this statement, so this essay will discuss several reasons of it. Firstly, olympics games combine sports and politic. it is the biggest international event. Therefor the countries where the games take place have huge opportunities to attract investment and create new jobs at the time of preparation for the games. For example, Winter olympics games in 2014 in Sochi forced Government to build new stadions, hotels, parks and to create new places where visitors can walk and relax. Many workers and investors have come to Sochi from other cities. Secondly, olympic games can show the country as the host nation and give an advertisement of culture and beautiful places where games take place. As a consequence, huge numbers of visitors come to this place after games. For example, after olympic games in Sochi in 2014, the number of tourists increased in four times in comparison with number of them in 2012. In conclusion, although some people believe that olympic games is not vitally important at this time, I reckon that this games give big possibilities for developing economic of country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, for example, i reckon, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1109.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 219.0 315.596192385 69% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06392694064 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84690116678 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60584609949 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 176.041082164 73% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.58904109589 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 354.6 506.74238477 70% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3900571723 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.3076923077 106.682146367 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8461538462 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.69230769231 7.06120827912 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25694596994 0.244688304435 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859362601379 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0668846093569 0.0667982634062 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.25694596994 0.151304729494 170% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.77 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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