The rise of convenience foods has helped people keep up with the speed of the modern life style. What are the advantages of this trend? Do the advantages outweigh its disadvantages?
"Food is fuel not therapy." Nevertheless, there are some issues which remains irrevocable and complex as ever. One such issue is related to the rise of convenience food in today's world. The given topic asserts that convenience food is beneficial for the people to keep up the pace with fast moving world. Through this essay, I will examine the question from both points of view.
On the one hand, there are people who believe that advantages of convenience food outweigh its disadvantages. Firstly, there are lots of street market for these types of food. So, anyone can have food anywhere and anytime. Secondly, vendors of these convenience food does not charge exorbitant rates. Infact, everyone has the ability to afford convenience food. For instance, in India, people are having good meal by paying just 30-40 rupees. Finally, these street foods does not take too much time to cook. So, in today's fast paced world, without squandering much time, people can have delicious food.
On the other hand, it is possible to make the opposing case. Although, street food is very much cheaper yet it does not has that much nutritional value which home made food has. Moreover, fast food has adverse effects on health. For instance, different types of oil are used to fry fast food and the oil block tje coronary artery which result in cardiac arrest. Furthermore, these convenience foods are not considered as hygienic food. Most of the vendors never follows rules and regulations to cook the food in hygienic way. So, it gives invitation to many diseases.
As we have seen, there are some factors which are against the use of convenience food. However, I tend to believe that in present times, where ther is always shortage of time, convenience food is a plausible solution. Furhermore, government should keep a check on the vendors by making them to follow rules so people get nutritional and hygienic food.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 245, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this convenience' or 'these conveniences'?
Suggestion: this convenience; these conveniences
...where and anytime. Secondly, vendors of these convenience food does not charge exorbitant rates. ...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: DOES_X_HAS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'have'? As 'do' is already inflected, the verb cannot also be inflected.
Suggestion: have
...od is very much cheaper yet it does not has that much nutritional value which home ...
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Line 5, column 121, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'have'
Suggestion: have
...od is very much cheaper yet it does not has that much nutritional value which home ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, for instance, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1603.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.9937694704 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59486036941 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.3963971641 49.4020404114 57% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.8636363636 106.682146367 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5909090909 20.7667163134 70% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.81818181818 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 3.4128256513 352% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221731579234 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702677936622 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649296076897 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141963958238 0.151304729494 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0388976759333 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.0946893788 72% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.07 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.48 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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