You migrated to another country. Write a letter to yuor friend to describe your present life and tell him/her why you chose the country?
Dear friend,
It is been long time to see you. I hope everything is fine. In the month of january of this year, I have shifted to the other country. As you know that i was not at all satisfied in the country where i reside earlier due to my financial and professional life. But, here I am feeling very much satisfied. My family feels very happy for me as I am living in good and relaxed environment. I am doing job as a supervisor in a reputed store. In weekdays, I remain busy at store and in weekend, I enjoy with my friends and also go to gym.
Here in this country, I am getting lots of opportunities to grow financially as well as professionally. Also, I have many other friends here in this country already. So, there is no problem in adjusting to the conditions. As you know, I like winter season so much, so, in this country, the temperature remains lowthrough out the year. All in all, I am feeling very satisfied to be here in this country.
With best wishes,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 153, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
... to the other country. As you know that i was not at all satisfied in the country...
^
Line 3, column 201, Rule ID: I_LOWERCASE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'I'?
Suggestion: I
...t at all satisfied in the country where i reside earlier due to my financial and ...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, you know, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 795.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 184.0 206.0 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.32065217391 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68302321012 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72368293382 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.592391304348 0.622605031667 95% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.6627474573 44.8134815571 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.7857142857 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.1428571429 16.8248392259 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.21428571429 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.29896907216 47% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127490910618 0.216113520407 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0415388535357 0.0766984524023 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.048157099728 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100437547805 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00468696730925 0.0580467560999 8% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.5 8.37731958763 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.89 8.71597938144 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 29.0 41.2886597938 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.