Write a letter to a teacher asking for a reference letter for a job and explain:-Why you have chosen him to write the reference letter-What kind of job you are applying for-Why you think you are suitable for this job

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Write a letter to a teacher asking for a reference letter for a job and explain:
-Why you have chosen him to write the reference letter
-What kind of job you are applying for
-Why you think you are suitable for this job

Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to bring to your notice that I am applying for a job in

a company. I need to provide a reference letter to the company. My wish is that

you give a reference letter for me. The reason behind this is that you have

observed me very closely throughout my graduation and postgraduation. You also

know the capabilities of me and how I can handle the critical situations very

well. You will refer me because yo know that I can perform my duties on time and

up to the mark.

As I have done my graduation and postgraduation in computers, I am applying for a

job as Data operator in a private company. My whole studies after senior

secondary school is in computers, so I am getting the opportunity to start my

career in that field.

I have a proficient user of computers. Also, job's requirement is to have good

knowledge of a particular database management software. I had used this

particular database management software for my final project. I know the

technicalities of this software and I will easily understand the whole process.

Looking forward from you to get the reference letter soon.

Thanking you

Yours faithfully,

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...e letter to the company. My wish is that you give a reference letter for me. The ...
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...ter to the company. My wish is that you give a reference letter for me. The rea...
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... The reason behind this is that you have observed me very closely throughout my g...
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...reason behind this is that you have observed me very closely throughout my graduatio...
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... graduation and postgraduation. You also know the capabilities of me and how I ca...
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... can handle the critical situations very well. You will refer me because yo know ...
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...handle the critical situations very well. You will refer me because yo know that...
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...that I can perform my duties on time and up to the mark. As I have done my gra...
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...I can perform my duties on time and up to the mark. As I have done my gradu...
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...uation in computers, I am applying for a job as Data operator in a private compan...
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...n in computers, I am applying for a job as Data operator in a private company. ...
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...e company. My whole studies after senior secondary school is in computers, so I a...
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...I am getting the opportunity to start my career in that field. I have a profic...
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...getting the opportunity to start my career in that field. I have a proficient u...
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.... Also, jobs requirement is to have good knowledge of a particular database manag...
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...ase management software. I had used this particular database management software ...
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...anagement software. I had used this particular database management software for my fin...
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...oftware for my final project. I know the technicalities of this software and I wi...
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...re for my final project. I know the technicalities of this software and I will easily unde...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, second, so, well

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 32.9175257732 122% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 3.85567010309 259% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 937.175257732 108% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95609756098 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00324631021 2.54303337028 118% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521951219512 0.622605031667 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 313.2 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.7005279039 44.8134815571 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5714285714 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.6428571429 16.8248392259 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.0 4.34317383033 46% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.29896907216 349% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 22.0 2.54639175258 864% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.367444750618 0.216113520407 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131907140196 0.0766984524023 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985200468917 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114534723733 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.124409978609 0.0580467560999 214% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 8.37731958763 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 70.7449484536 93% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.9 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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