With the rise of e-books comes the decline in paper books. Some people see this as a good step forward while others do not. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?
In this era, with the development in technology the paper books is being replaced by soft books. Mostly people think it is a good trend as it helps environment and easily accessible while others believe the opposite opinion.
In one hand, firstly, publishing books online ease the accessibility of them. This means that people can download or read online books by using electronic devices such as kindle from anywhere in the world. For example, when I was traveling to London, I used kindle to download and read books on airplane rather than physically having one. Moreover, one can easily adjust the size of the writing as per his convenience by just zooming into whereas, this option is not available in paper based books. Secondly, trees are used to make papers and by reducing the publishing of books will result in cutting less trees ultimately benefiting the environment.
On the other hand, one of the major disadvantage is that by using it extensively will have bad effect on eyes that is, by looking at the screen continuously eyes will start itching that can be cater by using eye drops. Furthermore, people are using less libraries now a days and rely on the internet ultimately decreasing the interest of people in reading books. For instance, now a days, children are preferring to play online games rather than reading books resulting in reading hobbies are declining among the young generation.
In conclusion, with the development in technology, paper books are diminishing which has positive impacts on environment and easily usable. Whereas, soft books are impacting the health and reducing the reading hobbies among new generation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1388.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10294117647 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73260462337 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 176.041082164 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555147058824 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5371480129 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.666666667 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.6666666667 20.7667163134 109% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5833333333 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.212675891715 0.244688304435 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826753580403 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0581570607648 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145840866123 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0842886848509 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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