Schooling is no longer necessary, since more and more information is accessible on the Internet, and students can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
With the advancement in technology and inventions like internet any content can be accessed online. many people believe that with the easy availability of study material on the internet children should be home taught instead of sending them to school. I disagree with this as in my opinion education institutions like school still plays a vital role in teaching and imparting education.
schools are an important part of a student's life. No matter how modernized the education becomes, attending school will be always be helpful to kids in many ways. students get a proper curriculum designed by schools for their betterment. Although, we now have everything on the internet still there is a need for someone who can filter out the necessary things and explain them in a much simpler way. having specialized teacher, students can anytime approach them and clarify their doubts. furthermore, schools offer a better environment where several kids, along with study, share different ideas and viewpoints with each other. Often studying with friends makes the subjects a lot easier and interesting. In addition to studies, kids can also take part in extra curricular activities which improves their physical as well as mental capabilities.
While home schooling looks easier it can be far more challenging than we think. Preparing the syllabus and getting all the relevent content from internet will be a tedious task. furthermore, there is a need for someone who is constantly available to guide and teach the children. having experienced teachers at home will be more expensive and might make the studies monotonous. Parents would need to keep a track of the studies and make sure that their children are getting good and quality education. Assessing the child's knowledge would be difficult and they may not take the exams held at home seriously.
In conclusion, the way of educating children will be always be better as compared to home. Using technology and internet for study at schools will make it more engrossing and fun.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, may, so, still, well, while, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24848484848 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75097611861 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584848484848 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 522.0 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6105766624 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 91.1578947368 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.84210526316 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.222486999805 0.244688304435 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0725848910216 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0543367833084 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145614474152 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0132116226739 0.056905535591 23% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.87 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.