Nowadays, majority shop sellers are choosing to sell imported foods. This is very bad situation and directly related to the human body. Therefore, shop sellers are introduce and sell fresh vegetables and fruits.
The imported foods are absorbing more chemicals. Those international foods coming from very far and exporters try to keep fresh and protect from small animals. So, exporters apply more chemicals to the foods. People buy these foods and indirectly they buying cancer and allergy. These days, people suffering cancers and people die too. The science mention, cancers growing main reason is people bad foods habit. The majority try to eat fast food because of their busy time schedule. Therefore, people suffering cancer and allergy. These bad side effects coming from imported foods.
However, nowadays people fastly move to eat and buy a carbon foods and fresh village foods. That is good motivation and habit. Most of the village farmers not apply the chemicals for foods. They have a lot of method to protect they are foods from side effects. In current situation, people mostly getting bad health and therefore, they are pay more attention to the local foods. People try to buy good foods and retailer seller also try to sell good village foods. Farmers also try to harvest without chemicals because of most demand foods are carbon foods.
In conclusion, government and sellers to be try to create new trend and good market. In my opinion, this new trend helps to maintain good foods habit and maintaining their human body perfectly.
- In many countries, young people of eighteen year old allow to do things such as driving a car, voting and marry. What is right time to take this responsibilities?What is your opinion? 56
- Shops should give preference in selling local food rather than imported food Do you agree or disagree 47
- Nowadays people get married and have children after the age of 30. Is it a positive or negative development? Give your opinion and examples based on your experience. 56
- Growing population is a big problem in developing countries. Should Government provide new homes in the cities or countryside. 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 165, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'introduced'.
Suggestion: introduced
...human body. Therefore, shop sellers are introduce and sell fresh vegetables and fruits. ...
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Line 1, column 183, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ore, shop sellers are introduce and sell fresh vegetables and fruits. The impo...
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Line 2, column 401, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
...ncers growing main reason is people bad foods habit. The majority try to eat fast foo...
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Line 4, column 139, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'foods'' or 'food's'?
Suggestion: foods'; food's
..., this new trend helps to maintain good foods habit and maintaining their human body ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, so, therefore, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1302.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10588235294 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34562260511 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.478431372549 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 387.9 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 20.2975951904 59% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.8050525672 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 62.0 106.682146367 58% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 20.7667163134 58% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 2.7619047619 7.06120827912 39% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171236311869 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0587624723665 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530099100673 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104775424099 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.034662261726 0.056905535591 61% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.7 13.0946893788 66% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.76 50.2224549098 135% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 11.3001002004 60% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.47 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.1190380762 67% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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