Nowadays, it is believed by many that merchandises should prioritize selling domestic food rather than those imported from other countries. From my point of view, I completely agree that shop owners should focus on selling local products. In this essay I will illustrate couple reasons to explain why this is the case.
To begin with, selling local food is beneficial to bolster the local economy, as it will bring more business opportunities, thereby begetting higher revenue for local farmers. For example, in China, the local economic growth in some areas, especially rural areas, is heavily rely on the agriculture industry, without consumers’ consumption, the farm owners will face a severe financial challenge. For this reason, it is sensible for shop owners to promote indigenous food, thus improvng the financial situation in some areas.
Another point to consider is that shops can in fact make more income from selling domestically produced food, as local products are more popular among the customers because of the fresh taste and afford price. Compared to international items, local food does not require long-distance transportation, which causes the deterioration in flavor and generates extra shipping cost. On the other hand, selling imported food can be risky for a business, as a shop can easily lose a considerable amount of money due to the delay in transportation.
In conclusion, selling local food is conducive to boost local economic growth as well as a safer business strategy. Therefore, I concur with the statement that stores should give priority to sell domestic products rather than imported ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'relied'.
Suggestion: relied
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to price'
Suggestion: to price
...s because of the fresh taste and afford price. Compared to international items, local...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
so, therefore, thus, well, for example, in conclusion, in fact, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 10.4138276553 19% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1389.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.38372093023 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91367961081 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596899224806 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.9589463835 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.272727273 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.81818181818 7.06120827912 139% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.378950219399 0.244688304435 155% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.144788853302 0.084324248473 172% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0813080963929 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.242968513486 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0710273412024 0.056905535591 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.86 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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