Should a city try to preserve its old, historic buildings or destroy them and replace them with modern buildings?What is your viewpoint on this issue?
It is often argued that town should ruin the historical buildings or replace them with modern building. As per my perspective , city should preserve their monuments because of these buildings are the historical symbol and the inspiration for the youth.
There is no denying that these buildings kept our culture together from a long time and all the people who have come here feel connected with the past memories by visiting these beautiful construction. These past shrines gives us the knowledge about the events that happened in the past and we can know better about our past generation by visit to there. For example, by seeing the tajmahal of agra we can know the power of past architect. I think these buildings keep our culture together because of historical consequences.
Another reason why we should protect these areas is because when Young people travel to these monuments then they gets inspired by seeing the scenic beauty of these places and how they are built by the humans without any kind of machine's. They also become motivated by watching the humans mind ability to build these kind of difficult project without any software or machines. For instance, the pyramids of egypt built by the heavy stone which no today machines can lift and the people of that time done this, these type of creations inspired humans to learn more. I believe that new generation can learn so many things by going to these place which were built by old technologies.
Agglomerating all the facts, i would like to ingeminate that these type of old creations should not be devastated rather than saved for our future generations to teach them our cultures through these tombs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, so, then, for example, for instance, i think, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 24.0651302605 166% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1398.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 283.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93992932862 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10153676581 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50733896013 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.565371024735 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 430.2 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.7474614162 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.090909091 106.682146367 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.7272727273 20.7667163134 124% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 7.06120827912 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.166377978216 0.244688304435 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0842900058261 0.084324248473 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104782539153 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13976517784 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.134696576921 0.056905535591 237% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.7 13.0946893788 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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