Should wealthy nations be required to share their wealth among poorer nations by providing such things as food and education. Or is it the responsibility of the government of the poorer nations to look after their citizens themselves.
Nowadays, most of countries are developing countries, few of are fully developed such as America, Canada, Australia.
Firstly, I would to like to describe wealthy nations should help poorer nations by providing such things as food and education. In some situation this idea play good role. But on the other hand wealthy nations create the opportunities of job
instead provide the food because if the poorer people will get food free then they will become lazy. They will not feel any requirement to do work. They will never try to improve their situation
In this way poor people become poorer day by day. But if any poorer country suffer from natural disaster such as earth quake, tsunami, volcanoes and much more. Then it is m oral responsibility to help the poorer nations.
On the other hand, providing education is a splendid idea to help the poorer nations education, play vital role to develop the people of that nation helps to improve their country economy.
Besides that, yes off course it is the responsibility of the government of any country to develop the economy and look after their citizens. Government need to make some steadies to control the corruptions create multiple options for job and work. Every country mainly effected by influence government should control that factor. Education also play a great role, and it is the responsibility of the government to provide education to the people of the country
At last in my views it is the responsibility of the country to look after their people. Because people choose their government with the believe it always help their citizens at anyhow. Government should take loan from others nations and innovate the chance of improvement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, firstly, if, look, so, then, such as, in my view, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1436.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05633802817 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6668763969 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.514084507042 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.004036115 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.7333333333 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9333333333 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.26666666667 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 7.0 4.38176352705 160% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410862156269 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13014199249 0.084324248473 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111687262772 0.0667982634062 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187618668362 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.109642361109 0.056905535591 193% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.75 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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