Small town center shops are running out of their businesses because rural residents tend to go shopping in big cities store. To what extent do the advantages of this development outweigh the advantages?
In modern society, villagers tend to buy products in huge city malls rather than in local ones. Some people think that large supermarkets replace local stores is advantageous while other assume that there are some disadvantages as well. In this essay, I will examine both sides of the argument and then I will give my own opinion on the matter.
On one side of the argument, there are people who believe that the replacement of country shops by country shops by larger markets is positive development. Supporters of this opinion may argue that supermarkets have vast variety of products under one roof and a country dweller can probably purchase all necessary goods from food to clothes in a one store. While small rural shops suggest lack of products and accordingly have a limited choice.
On the other side, there are people who believe that local stores are suffering from buyer’s shift to the big city malls. First, country shops probably better suit to local needs and always provide commodities to fit specific needs of countryside. For example, a rural store can have rubber-fishing boots, while you will never find this stuff in a supermarket. In addition, tendency to buy everything in a large city store may lead to disappearance of small rural shops and as a result, local economy will decline because country funds will move to a city and its development.
In conclusion, I believe that both sides have their merits. On balance, however I think that rural shops should be saved, as it is important for local economy and they provide products for all basic needs.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, however, if, may, so, then, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1324.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94029850746 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6602672062 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529850746269 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 423.0 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.8961925272 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.333333333 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.1666666667 7.06120827912 144% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.200691590298 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731430575253 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381115748796 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116432214274 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381004232381 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.67 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.