In some areas of US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out if doors after a particular time at night unlessthey are accompanied by an adult.
What is your opinion about this?
In order to control crime rate, sometimes the US government has to take strict actions like imposing 'curfew' in certain areas. During this interval young children are restricted from roaming independently and obliged to have an adult's company. I strongly advocate this notion.
To begin with, teenagers are not capable enough to protect themselves in critical and dangerous situations. If they are not accompanied by their parents or guardians then they can be either a victim of a crime or in the worse case be part of crime due to lack of awareness. To illustrate, in the US there is a huge underground market for drug trafficking operating in darkness which takes advantage of the innocence of young children and use them as a carrier for drugs transportation. Therefore in order to protect the children from such situations, adult supervision is mandatory.
Secondly, the adolescence phase is important in the overall development of a child. This is the phase in which children learn most of the life lessons by cognition and imitating others. Thus it is extremely important that they are surrounded by a decent company and good thoughts. If children are set to open to go out in the curfew area then there are viable chances that violent scenes and criminal actions cause detrimental effects on them. For example, the report of Times now shows children living in slum areas are exposed to crimes during curfew due to lack of parental attention. Considering the importance of this tender age in overall life development, children should be protected by imposing curfew.
To sum up, the aforementioned examples and facts clearly illustrate the importance of guidance and parental assistance in livies of teenagers during crimial circumstances.Thus, for children's safety and well being, I strongly support the notion of implementing regulations of curfew.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: adults'; adult's
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Suggestion: Therefore,
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Suggestion: Thus
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, well, as to, for example, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1592.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.28903654485 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03596685325 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.584717607973 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 493.2 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.5292531081 49.4020404114 118% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.714285714 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.5 20.7667163134 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.07142857143 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143725391143 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0474307287251 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0254708153972 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0833615034371 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0290631345321 0.056905535591 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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