Write a letter to your friend who is moving to a new home.
You have time to help her?
How can you help her move?
Ask questions about new home
Dear Alex,
How are you? I am guaranteed that you are excited to move to your new home. Also, I can understand your anxiety about leaving everything behind and switching to a new place. But don't worry I would be there with you to give a hand.
As you know, this weekend my parents will go to my native place for a family function. Therefore, I am available to help you with all the chores right from packaging all your belongings from the old house to set everything to a new place.
I have seen an informative video about effective ways of packing. It succinctly explains the ways to pack the stuff along with categorizing them, so that it would be easy to unpack it as per necessity. Therefore, by following those tips I could help you in packaging. Nevertheless, we would need some help with transportation.
By the way, does your home have a garden? Considering your affection for flowers and bushes I was thinking of gifting you a beautiful, albeit a small rose-bush.
I would come to your place on Saturday at or around 9 AM. Call me if there are any changes to the plan.
Love,
Pallavi
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ehind and switching to a new place. But dont worry I would be there with you to give...
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Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... my native place for a family function. Therefore I am available to help you in all the c...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 208, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ose tips I could help you in packaging. Although we would need some help with transporta...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, therefore, well, you know, as well as, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 878.0 937.175257732 94% => OK
No of words: 193.0 206.0 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.54922279793 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72725689877 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58064379732 2.54303337028 101% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.642487046632 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0870953181 44.8134815571 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.5384615385 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.8461538462 16.8248392259 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23076923077 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 7.41237113402 121% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310366662789 0.216113520407 144% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100795404278 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0927807440665 0.0603063233224 154% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153505234816 0.12726935374 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.107556680909 0.0580467560999 185% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.52 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.