You are a member of a sport club. Write a letter to the club president about an event that will be organized.
In your letter, you should tell:
what it is
who I am inviting
what my role is in this event.
Dear Sir Or Madam,
Like every year, this time also we have organized an annual sports event. Therefore I am writing this letter to give you insights into the event.
To begin with, it is going to be only a one-day event, starting from 9 AM with the inauguration ceremony by our senior-most member of the club Mr. Smith followed by his speech about the importance of sports in life. After 9.30 AM there will be 3 parallel events as a football match, cricket match and 100-meter race at there respective sports grounds. Furthermore, there will be a lunch break between 1 PM to 2 PM along with some recreational activities. At 4 PM we will close the event with price distribution.
It would be certainly a great pleasure to receive a sports award from a famous sports celebrity. Considering this in mind, I have invited a well-known cricketer Mr. Kambali to distribute the prices. It would be certainly a golden opportunity to share a stage with a legend like him.
Finally, I would like to inform you about responsible persons in case there is any difficulty. Mr. Clark is taking care of food arrangements and first aids in case of any accidents. And I would be primarily engaged in anchoring the event and hosting the guest along with monitoring the event.
I hope you will be satisfied with the arrangements. Please let me know in case of any concerns.
Yours Faithfully,
Pallavi Chaudhari
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 75, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... have organized an annual sports event. Therefore I am writing this letter to give you in...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 13, column 80, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...to receive a sports award from a famous sports celebrity. Considering this in mind, I ...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, furthermore, if, so, therefore, well, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 32.9175257732 64% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 26.3917525773 155% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1180.0 937.175257732 126% => OK
No of words: 244.0 206.0 118% => OK
Chars per words: 4.83606557377 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.95227774224 3.78020617076 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82800843086 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 127.690721649 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606557377049 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 290.88556701 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 1.44329896907 346% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0225336377 44.8134815571 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.6666666667 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.2666666667 16.8248392259 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.2 4.34317383033 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.301057808926 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935045597736 0.0766984524023 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794155859944 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156278271879 0.12726935374 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0833019081523 0.0580467560999 144% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 8.37731958763 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 8.71597938144 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.99 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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