Some argue that it is the responsibility of the parents to teach children about healthy eating habits, whereas others believe that teachers should be responsible for teaching their students how to eat in a healthy way.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
While some people believe that it is the duty of parents to educate the importance of healthy food habits to their own kids, others take the view that it is the responsibility of teachers.In my opinion, both parents and teachers have equal responsibility in teaching youngsters the importance of well-balanced diets
On one side of the argument, there are people who hold the opinion that parents should encourage children about the significance of nutritious foods.The most compelling reason for believing this that parents usually provide home-cooked food instead of giving money to buy products available in the school tuck shops. For Instance, it is found that children who ate from the cafeteria are much obese than the other students. Children used to buy calorie intensified foods such as burger, french fries, and sodas which have a detrimental effect on child mental and physical growth.
On the other side of the argument, others believe that teachers are responsible to educate healthy food routines to the children as both parents are working for their bread and butter and they don't have ample time to cook food for their children. So teachers should monitor students about their food intake and help the students in selecting nutritious food from the cafeteria. To illustrate, schools in Japan, there is no free time for lunch as the children eat the food in class prepared at school.
In Conclusion, both views are commonly held in society I believe that both parents and teachers have equal importance when it comes to eating habits.The reason for this that parents usually provide homely meals to children and in school teachers monitor the students and help in selecting healthy food from the cafeteria to the students.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 285.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11578947368 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10876417139 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64827452434 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.491228070175 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 441.0 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 175.470330069 49.4020404114 355% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 208.285714286 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 40.7142857143 20.7667163134 196% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.364430542593 0.244688304435 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160322927784 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102464972499 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236746724851 0.151304729494 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0706243143772 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.0 13.0946893788 176% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.34 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 11.3001002004 157% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.3 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.78 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 57.0 9.78957915832 582% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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