In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

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In some cities and towns all over the world, the high volume of traffic is a problem. What are the causes of this and what actions can be taken to solve this problem?

It is impossible to imagine our life without transport in cities. However, it is said that the traffic capacity is almost exceeded. This essay will consider what cause this overload and suggest some feasible steps to tackle this problem.

The first reason is that urban areas often have a poor design of roads. Initially cities and their infrastructure to accommodate a small number of people, but now with the growth of population cities cannot meet extra pressure on the traffic capacity. The second cause of the problem with heavy traffic is a growing number of cars. Modern life with its hectic lifestyle usually forces people to purchase cars so that they can either arrive at work on time or drop their children, for example, at school. The last reason is that public transport is inadequate in number and quality to meet the needs of citizens. Many people prefer to take a drive in personal cars instead of buses because public transportation is often of low-quality and dissatisfy all needs.

As a possible solution to the problem with growing number of cars on the roads is to redesign existing highways. City authorities can both widen narrow roads and construct new branches in street where it is impossible to change the bandwidth. Another way to deal with this problem is to raise taxes on vehicles. As soon as the government increases taxation on personal transport, the number of car purchases will decline and, therefore, roads will become free of cars to some extend. On top of that, municipal transportation can rise in number and quality. If the number of buses, for instance, were more in quantity and had better interior, people would change their preferences and choose buses instead. Therefore, the government should subsidize this industry and make standards for public transport operators tighter.

In conclu, there are many factors, mainly relating to the poor architecture of roads and public transport, that increase the traffic load in cities, but it is possible to solve this issue mostly by the government.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...nitially cities and their infrastructure to accommodate a small number of people,...
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...nd their infrastructure to accommodate a small number of people, but now with the growth of popu...
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Suggestion: inadequate
...last reason is that public transport is inadequate in number and quality to meet the needs of citize...
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...ow-quality and dissatisfy all needs. As a possible solution to the problem with...
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... roads will become free of cars to some extend. On top of that, municipal transportati...
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...hitecture of roads and public transport, that increase the traffic load in cities...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, second, so, therefore, for example, for instance, on top of that

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1713.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 338.0 315.596192385 107% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06804733728 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28774723029 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65627259731 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556213017751 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 528.3 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.3006106882 49.4020404114 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.764705882 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8823529412 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.23529411765 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211603080839 0.244688304435 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0666340075725 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0853197987397 0.0667982634062 128% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.145343656417 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.081526347122 0.056905535591 143% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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