In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their level of health and fitness are decreasing.
What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
Mean weight of people is augmenting rapidly and the state of wellness is decreasing day by day. This is mainly because of lack of exercise and bad eating habits. However, there are number of solutions which should be implemented to deal with these raised concerns.
First and foremost, reason for weight gain among people is lack of workout. In modern era people are living in a fast-paced world and everybody is busy with their routine chores. Moreover, many found it difficult to go to gym due to their tight schedule. Secondly, junk food serves as last nail in coffin because readymade food is rich in fatty acid and main cause of pilling up of lipids. As a result, many of them struggle with weight gain which leads to obesity. In western countries people eat food that is rich in carbohydrates and fats and gaining weight in brisk regardless of the consequences.
Nevertheless, there are two effective solution to the problem of bulkiness. One way to tackle this is to have proper healthy diet which should be rich in essential vitamins and nutrients. By doing this it will help them to reintegrate their healthy body. Another method of dealing with these issues is changing daily routine and sparing some time for a walk to burn depot of fat. This solution would hopefully prevent them from weight deposition and increase health benefits.
In conclusion, obesity among people is becoming more common and physical health is declining rapidly. Junk food and absence of workout are the main culprits. However, sparing time for exercise and proper diet would help overcoming these problems.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 221, Rule ID: ADVISE_VBG[5]
Message: The verb 'help' is used with infinitive: 'to overcome' or 'overcome'.
Suggestion: to overcome; overcome
...for exercise and proper diet would help overcoming these problems.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, well, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1336.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98507462687 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55739419966 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574626865672 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 404.1 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.3114908476 49.4020404114 47% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 78.5882352941 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7647058824 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76470588235 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180042778858 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0528505124087 0.084324248473 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033506271601 0.0667982634062 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0990194512676 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0355720931135 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 64.71 50.2224549098 129% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 11.3001002004 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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