In some countries, the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of this problem and what measures could be taken to solve them?
In some parts of the world, it is observed people are becoming increasingly obese, and at the same time, the level of their fitness is going down. This essay outlines the various reasons of this phenomenon and provides some effective solutions to tackle this issue.
Beginning with the causes, the sedentary lifestyle is the major culprit behind this trend. People are no longer involved in any kind of physical work at their workplaces, and at homes, they tend to relax while watching television. Similarly, children's would rather prefer to play video games than playing in stadiums. Secondly, junk food is becoming increasingly popular amongst societies because it is not only cheaper but also takes less time to prepare and eat. Thirdly, owing to the lack of time people do not have spare time for exercise, and for the same reason, they enjoy to travel by cars despite walking or bicycling to their destinations.
Moving on, various measures could be implemented by governments and individuals to address this problem. The first solution would be that not only the government bodies could subside the healthy food products such as fruits and vegetables, but also should impose taxes on the junk food items. As a result, civilians would be encouraged to eat nutritious food products and their obesity level would be decreased. The second step would be the instalment of free pieces of equipment for exercise in public places, such as gardens, parks, so that ordinary people can get the benefits of exercise who cannot afford expensive health clubs. Last but not least, individuals need to understand their responsibility to spend the minimum allowed time at their offices show that quality time could be spent on fitness rather than just take care of careers. Along with that, they can come forward to avoid oily and processed food to maintain their health.
In conclusion, two major changes have been seen in a few countries that the level of fitness have been decreasing in the same portion to the increment of weight level of individuals. However, by taking the above-expressed solutions into practice this transformation can be addressed.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, second, secondly, similarly, so, third, thirdly, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12181303116 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67885935186 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.583569405099 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 549.0 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.6040772813 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.533333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.5333333333 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.73333333333 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22749826437 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0727976444378 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466967651397 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136485372634 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0485315262751 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.5 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.21 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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