In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?
The recent trend in certain countries is that the average weight of individuals is growing and their health and fitness levels are deteriorating. With the latest technology enhancements boosting on one side, obesity and other health concerns are arising on the other side. This essay will outline the causes related to these issues and the conservative measures to be followed to resolve them.
First and foremost, the enormous increase in the weights of people can be related to the fact that individuals tend to spend a majority amount of time on computers, televisions and electronic gadgets with no physical exercise to eradicate the harmful effects they cause. Another major cause for this is the consumption of processed foods that are being easily available in the recent times. To illustrate, the high levels of sugar content and increasing amount of calories in these varieties of processed unhealthy foods leads to obesity, cardiac problems, and other health-related issues, thereby suppressing fitness levels of an individual.
One possible measure that can be implemented is that the Government can create awareness among the public about the health and fitness by making use of advertising campaigns. This kind of awareness creates a sense of warning to escape from the obvious negative effects for a healthy lifestyle. In addition, a minimal physical activity must be a compulsory routine for everyone to stay fit and in the pink of health. To give a clear example, the people of Japan are said to be the fittest, since they make it a point to regularly indulge themselves in physical fitness activities in any form. Furthermore, avoiding packaged foods and consuming home-cooked food can contribute to a healthy living lifestyle.
With the above facts clearly stated, it is evident that, although the obesity levels of people are rising high, there are possible methods to minimise these issues and lead a healthy, fit and successful lifestyle.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, so, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1654.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25079365079 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82660220409 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.561904761905 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 532.8 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.0054373521 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.833333333 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.25 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.232676479191 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0836668713524 0.084324248473 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0632152856709 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.140482760254 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0549900298216 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.0946893788 125% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.47 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.54 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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