In some countries children under 16 can not be allowed to leave school by law and get full time work. Is this good or bad thing. To what extend do you agree or disagree.
Education is necessity in modern world hence, it's mandatory to pass such bills and facilities which encourage children to complete their education. In some countries it's illegal if teenager drop out from school for the job and I totally support these kind of rules. I believe complete education offer lot of opportunities in future growth of kids such as job in reputed company.
Firstly, education is vital for every child to develop them as a person as well as successful human being. Education provides crucial knowledge to meet our goals in life in other words, if some student has a degree from university in computers then he can grab a job in multinational company as an engineer and then he can travel to another country for the work in this way he can become wealthy in money as well as in experience. However, student with the insufficient educational qualification will stuck in low salary jobs like plumbing, type writer, drivers, security guards. Low wages lead in lack of money and then this situations lead in physical difficulties such as stress. To avoid future loss of kids its essential to stop them from dropping out of school and teach them value of education and knowledge in their early age.
Secondly, children under 16 are really small to do any kind of job due to their lack of knowledge and they are really need to learn vital information which can help them to grow in future. Under 16 is age when kids has to be play and develop themselves as a person and find their area of interest so, later they can work on that and become a successful in their careers. Many families are big in sizes and don't have enough money to survive therefore, every family member has to do job. Teenagers also interested in support their family doing job which give money but sometime because of the poor knowledge they choose wrong fields to earn more money for instance, hacking , drug dealing. To avoid these situations in kids life there is only way possible is an education hence, strong rules and regulations are essential in education system.
To sum up, I strongly agree with the laws which government is applying in some countries to prove the importance of education in teenagers also such rules has to be applied by every country in the world for the better society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 246, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this kind' or 'these kinds'?
Suggestion: this kind; these kinds
...chool for the job and I totally support these kind of rules. I believe complete education ...
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Line 3, column 502, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'stick'
Suggestion: stick
...fficient educational qualification will stuck in low salary jobs like plumbing, type ...
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Line 5, column 119, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'needed'.
Suggestion: needed
...r lack of knowledge and they are really need to learn vital information which can he...
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Line 5, column 179, Rule ID: IN_PAST[1]
Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
...information which can help them to grow in future. Under 16 is age when kids has to be pl...
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Line 5, column 407, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ers. Many families are big in sizes and dont have enough money to survive therefore,...
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Line 5, column 481, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...therefore, every family member has to do job. Teenagers also interested in suppo...
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Line 5, column 621, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to wrong'
Suggestion: to wrong
...cause of the poor knowledge they choose wrong fields to earn more money for instance,...
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Line 5, column 674, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...to earn more money for instance, hacking , drug dealing. To avoid these situations...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, well, as to, for instance, kind of, such as, as well as, in other words, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1894.0 1615.20841683 117% => OK
No of words: 399.0 315.596192385 126% => OK
Chars per words: 4.74686716792 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.46933824581 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5803052145 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518796992481 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 604.8 506.74238477 119% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 57.7475593618 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 135.285714286 106.682146367 127% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5714285714 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141923292518 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464189370992 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0464060574459 0.0667982634062 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0914600875309 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0257811020635 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.2 13.0946893788 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.57 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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