In the current era, money is the most usual way to pay compensations for their employees by employers. A certain group of workers is highly paid and this makes some people argue on imposing certain rules to control the wages while some consider it as a benefit to the country. In this essay, I will delve into both the arguments and provide my personal opinion about the issue.
On the one hand, there are several reasons for certain people in support to reasons for paying extremely high salaries. Firstly, paying high salaries represent the result of the hard work offered to the company they are working for. Such way they are more capable enough to support their families, such as, improving their children’s education or getting themselves treated in a better hospital. Furthermore, supporting the government by paying high taxes contributed from their income, results in helping the government to plow back those resources as an investment to the government projects as for example infrastructure improvements. As a result, both workers and governing bodies are benefited.
On the other hand, several others argue that the inconsistency in wages leads to an imbalance in the society. Firstly, to achieve such high wages, people tend to overwork by turning a blind eye to their personal life. Results lead them to subtle situations like couples end up divorcing due to lack of time or losing communication with their children who start to addict themselves to drugs. Furthermore, due to the imbalance in society, crime rate also increases. For example, people below the poverty line are prone to involve into illegal acts.
Personally, I believe that very high salaries can encourage people to work harder. However, a certain level of restrictions needs to be set up to ensure balance in the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, so, while, as for, for example, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.11409395973 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80140048756 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.590604026846 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 475.2 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.8655760897 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8666666667 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.26666666667 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253749511444 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0799812255056 0.084324248473 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0732362914387 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152869059417 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0431853938284 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.36 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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