Nowadays, the crime rate is increasing at an alarming rate around the globe. Profound research has shown that the criminals even after being punished for their crime, found to commit a crime again after they are released from prison. There are several causes behind the scenario. In this essay, I will provide a couple of reasons with practical ways to tackle such situations by relevant endorsements.
Firstly, considering the newbies at crime, they could be several distress calls in their life which triggered them to commit the first crime. During imprisonment, they are acquainted with the most notorious criminals in the jail premises. This act of officials, place the newbies under an ambiguous situation to regret or to take it easy. Taking it easy is an effortless solution under their influence. This can be endorsed by research conducted at National Jail of Singapore that compares newbies sent to jail with sending to rehab centers. The outcome was surprising, 78% returned from jail ended up committing a crime again, while it is only 2% in the other scenario.
Moreover, society does not accept the criminals once they are released. There are even some cases where their own family isolates them. Also, it is arduous for them to find jobs, so for the survival, they tend to commit a crime again. To handle such situations, the government need to take measures in supporting them. For instance, the Singapore government is utilizing services from criminals based on their capabilities, even this helps the governing bodies to keep an eye on those individuals for an ample amount of time.
To sum up, prevention is always better than cure. Criminals are just like us and their personal situations dragged them to such subtle situations. Authorities need to take necessary steps in rehabbing the criminals and provide support with employment opportunities. Alternatively, they need to take forceful measures to develop a crime free society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, while, even so, for instance, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 10.4138276553 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1645.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17295597484 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75390736502 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588050314465 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.3330125032 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5789473684 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7368421053 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.15789473684 7.06120827912 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.203053601465 0.244688304435 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586815566513 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523901105423 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126961221225 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0441870167683 0.056905535591 78% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.41 12.4159519038 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.9 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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