Recently the phenomenon of building houses in the countryside is increasing at an alarming rate and its corresponding idea has sparked a long dispute. Even though contested by many stating that such constructions are highly beneficial, it is regarded as destructive by a substantial number of individuals. Personally, I promote the idea of the construction of homes in the countryside will have a negative impact in the future. In this essay, I provide my reasons that are reinforcing my views.
First of all, cities are populated heavily, and so they require new locations to reside. The last generation is fond of the city lifestyle and made the cities grow out of its perimeters. But now they are fed up with the egregious consequences and are planning to occupy the countryside with all the amenities of the city. To support it, they hypothesize saying that their health can be recovered with the rural environmental conditions. But, there are indirect drawbacks related to such developments as they may lead to pollution even in the countryside. Additionally, expansion at rural locations will have a direct impact on natural habitats disturbing the natural balance. This can be endorsed by statistics on world forest which shows that we lost 30% of forests in the last 10 years due to the human expansion.
In addition, knowing the fact that the immense development of cities causing health disorders, the majority of industries plan to take such development to the countryside. The major reason behind it is to bring down production costs. To engulf it, they hypothesize saying that villagers leading unsophisticated life even in the 21st century and it is the time to focus on rural development. Personally, I experienced it in my hometown, which is no more a village. Even though the industrial establishment makes us feel happy, most of the natural habitats are nowhere found.
Personally, in my opinion, I believe shelter is the basic necessity for every living creature on the earth, whereas to obtain it we humans are turning a blind eye on the environment, which escorts us to face natural disasters in the near future.
- Nowadays celebrities are more famous for their glamour and wealth than for their achievements, and this sets a bad example to young people.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? 84
- In many places, new homes are needed, but the only space available for building them is in the countryside. Some people believe it is more important to protect the countryside and not build new homes there. What is your opinion? 78
- In recent years , many small local shops have closed because customers travel to large shopping centers or malls to do their shopping.Is this a positive or negative development ? 89
- In some countries, a few people earn extremely high salaries. Some people think that this is good for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn.Discuss both views and give your opinion 67
- Everyone should become vegetarian because they do not need to eat meat to have a healthy diet. Do you agree or disagree? 70
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, whereas, as to, in addition, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1792.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07648725212 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08359510504 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 200.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.56657223796 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 572.4 506.74238477 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.5443535564 49.4020404114 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.411764706 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.7647058824 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.76470588235 7.06120827912 67% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0849831775864 0.244688304435 35% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234913090437 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0277637631169 0.0667982634062 42% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0502423135666 0.151304729494 33% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0271779679238 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.18 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.24 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 103.0 78.4519038076 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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