Recently, the phenomenon of shopping at large shopping centers is increasing at an alarming rate which leads to the downfall of community stores. Personally, I concur with the argument that says large shopping malls offer a better experience. In this essay, I will provide my reasons that are reinforcing my views of welcoming the trend.
To begin with, knowing the fact that local stores do not offer a wide range of products, people are searching for other options to gain such accessibility. In general large malls have the capability to offer a spectrum of goods under a single roof. Additionally, they are configured with various entertainment facilities like food courts, movie theatres and so on, which improves the shopping experience. Being aware of such facilities and experience, people tend to change their shopping trends. Moreover, they can escape the traffic congestion in cities by not visiting multiple locations.
In addition, due to high returns of investments, large shopping malls are able to offer discounts. This satisfies the one shot two bird concept, as people can reduce the burden on the pocket besides to the entertainment. Furthermore, the government has no control over the regional shops and so, they may collect additional charges over the labeled price and which will not be presented for tax calculations. Personally, I am experiencing it at our local retail store where the prices would be a couple of bucks higher. When questioned, the answer will be the transport and storage costs over the product.
Taking everything into consideration, I pen down to say that, to meet the needs of modern shoppers’ demand, mega malls are emerging. So, everyone needs to welcome the change and enjoy the delight. Moreover, the government needs to take necessary precautions to ensure the collection of taxes and implement laws against the increase of product cost over the price tag.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, may, moreover, so, in addition, in general, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21682847896 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92141427159 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621359223301 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 492.3 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.3869865465 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.75 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3125 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.9375 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.183475045292 0.244688304435 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565764378203 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534062991045 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107700205427 0.151304729494 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.063043846891 0.056905535591 111% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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