In some countries, a few people earn extremely higher salaries. Some people think that it is suitable for a country, while others believe that the government should control salaries and limit the amount people can earn. Discuss both views.
Higher salaries indeed are earned by only a few people in some countries. Some people opine that differences in the income of citizens are suitable for the country. Others, however, say that earnings must be controlled and restricted by the government. In my opinion, a few people earning a higher salary are beneficial for the country.
Some people say that difference in salary boosts the economic development of a country. The reason behind it is that highly paid people tend to spend money on living a comfortable life. The money, when flows in the market, aid economic growth. Also, this class contributes maximum to the economy by paying more taxes to the government. If the government restricts their salaries, the money might not be available to improve infrastructure, health, education, and transportation. Also, these high salaries groups employ poor people who are not capable of meeting their basic needs.
However, others vehemently contend that the difference in salaries has widened the gap between poor and rich, in turn, fragmented the society into two strata. Only the affluent class has the resources to live a luxurious life, and poor people are struggling to survive. If the government does not control the salaries, it generates more disparity in society. Furthermore, it may increase criminal activities in the society because people try to meet their basic needs by doing unethical acts.
In conclusion, Although there are good reasons why the government should limit the earnings, I hold the view that the difference in the salary aids economic growth and, undoubtedly, good for the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 204, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...and, undoubtedly, good for the country.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, may, so, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 41.998997996 69% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.2183908046 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80789852446 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 148.0 176.041082164 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567049808429 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 423.9 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3311925975 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.8 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.93333333333 7.06120827912 70% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.359544941294 0.244688304435 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123975054234 0.084324248473 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.1154045013 0.0667982634062 173% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214173536412 0.151304729494 142% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.13373590743 0.056905535591 235% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.7 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.65 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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