In some countries, it is illegal now to reject applicants due to their age? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The world is exceedingly moving towards development in a number of sectors. Resources required for these project are exponentially high. Therefore, in my opinion, I believe despite age limit, anybody should be able to contribute to their country's advancement.
To begin with, if we consider the Information Technology sector, nowadays, adolescence is exceedingly intrigued about developing software and coding. Moreover, start-up companies are establishing increasingly whilst releasing an abundance of new products to the market. Most of such companies are being run by the younger generation. For instance, there are even school-aged children who are running their personnel businesses such as YouTube channels, online stores. In fact, this trend is giving perfect opportunity for large enterprises to find and acquire suitable talents for their companies. Therefore, it is vitally important that age should not be an obstacle for both employers to hire and employees to utilize their skills.
Furthermore, when it comes to experience, elderly people can contribute to society better than anyone. Also, we should take into account that, although youngsters are equipped with skills and talents, to drive them properly, matured guidance is required. As an example, as aforementioned, if a newly started tech-start-up required to hire a CEO to run their business, they should be able to hire anyone they want despite age constraints. If the government restricted such enrollments, such small companies would not be able to be successful and thrive in the market. Conversely, by allowing anybody to work in their prefered field as they want, the government can ease the unemployment rate in the country. However, despite all advantages, I believe, there should be some rules to prevent abuse of children and elderly people in blue-collar jobs.
In conclusion, technological sector and other sectors can gain benefits from youngsters and adults despite the age limits. With proper rule to mitigate the misconducts, this trend could help the world positively.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, conversely, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1757.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.57777777778 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06884801975 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.615873015873 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 546.3 506.74238477 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.6919646415 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.352941176 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5294117647 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.76470588235 7.06120827912 124% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0913239818948 0.244688304435 37% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0283169700812 0.084324248473 34% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0267268186246 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0576239257804 0.151304729494 38% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229619897328 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.64 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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