In some countries, it is possible for the people to have access to a variety of food that has been transported from all over the world.
Do the benefits of imported food outweigh its drawbacks?
In this era of globalization, people of several nations have options to eat a food that is originated in foreign. It was shown that in past that, every new trend come with its positives and negatives.This essay will discuss both and provides my opinion in the conclusion.
To begin with, by importing food that has been prepared at far distance have several advantages. First, people can get a authentic taste of the food which fulfill the people's need of different cuisines without visiting originated place. For example, a person can eat a Chinese noodles by sitting in backyard of house in New York. Moreover, it is difficult to get a ingredients, recipe and proper atmosphere to prepare a food. Hence, the import is the only option if one have to try foreign food. For example, It is impossible to prepare Parmesan cheese at every place. It can only be prepared at certain environment and ingredients.
On the other hand, importing food have devastating effect on local food culture as people become more dependent on overseas food. As a result, demand of local cuisines would get affected and it became true for Iran where bakery food items became obsolete as result of imported bakery product from China. Furthermore, people may have adverse effect on their health by consuming packaged food as preservatives are required to keep food fresh which could not be health friendly sometimes. Recent study by world organization reported that, In 2021, 20 percent of people might get obesity related problems by eating imported preserved food.
To recapitulate, there several positives that came in to existence by imported food but overall effect of imported food have more disadvantages to the society
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'food'.
Suggestion: food
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...veral advantages. First, people can get a authentic taste of the food which fulfi...
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a ingredient' or simply 'ingredients'?
Suggestion: a ingredient; ingredients
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Message: The proper name in singular (Parmesan) must be used with a third-person verb: 'cheeses'.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, if, may, moreover, so, then, for example, as a result, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1430.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07092198582 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78023230422 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581560283688 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 464.4 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.6093067981 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.142857143 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1428571429 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.310424554896 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112745197974 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707718579896 0.0667982634062 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.188760173718 0.151304729494 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0604615260294 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.