In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone nowadays than in the past. Do you think it is a positive or negative development?
The category of people who prefer to live solely is indeed getting wider than before. While I accept the idea that this trend has its merits in terms of independence, I agree that it also has a negative impact on family unity.
On the one hand, people who choose to follow this trend are mostly targeting to be more independent. To illustrate, living alone allows persons to become more responsible as they more able to plan for every step on their own and gaining their livelihood for instance; consequently, this creates more refined and powerful personalities that could lead to a prominent future. This is a notable positive development that I had witnessed after my sister chose to finish her Pharmacy study in another city; she has become a more mature character and a team leader at her work. As a result, some people would lead a brighter future if they decided to lead an independent life.
On the other hand, although the remarkable merit of choosing this trend, I believe that there might be a significant drawback on family bonding. Owing to the fact that this living arrangement isolates people from their families, it could weaken the relations between family members. For example, people could not be able to take care of their parents if they got sick, moreover, they might miss the family gatherings during some important events such as weddings, and this, by time, can grow a gap among family members. Hence, some people might be risking their relationships with their beloved ones if they chose to separate themselves away from their homes.
To conclude, despite the considerable effect on people’s personalities, it seems to me that it is utmost to pay attention to its possible impact on their humanitarian relationships.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, hence, if, moreover, so, while, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1469.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99659863946 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76258536904 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598639455782 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 56.4064353635 49.4020404114 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 133.545454545 106.682146367 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7272727273 20.7667163134 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7272727273 7.06120827912 152% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172718377304 0.244688304435 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669478690766 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0322666620735 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0956769899535 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0512763853181 0.056905535591 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 50.2224549098 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.02 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.85 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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