The metropolitan cities are said to have an immense significance for mankind in this competitive world; thus, during the last one decade, the migration in the big cities has risen briskly almost throughout the world, due to this there is a swift decrease in the quality of life. Further, the anatomization of causes and solutions is yet to be instigated in the subsequent paragraphs.
Myriad of reasons that need to be considered behind the declination of quality of life in the cities, the first and foremost is overpopulation because it creates congestion and other social issues; thereby, living the number of people in the cities. Besides this, a large number of people tend to use more private vehicles for commuting the destinations in this fast-moving world; hence, this usage of vehicles leads to air pollution, and meanwhile, people have to face atrocious consequences on their physical health. The overload in public places, schools, and hospitals is also associated with the major cause of stress on the people’s mind in the urban areas as they do not get relaxation for the stability of mind.
There are certain solutions that may have a fruitful outcome in order to enhance the quality of life in the cities. Firstly, government have to live up to their responsibilities in terms of improving the condition of transportation , it is evident that the less dependency on private vehicles and more on public vehicles such as trains and buses may lead to solving the problem of traffic congestion and pollution, and thereafter, people can enjoy the good environment free from noise and harmful gases. Finally, commencing campaigns to aware the people about nuclear families is likely to be a prominent way to control the population; subsequently, people will be careful about this certitude for getting better comforts as well as facilities.
In conclusion, though solving problems is an arduous task, yet the amalgamation of both the government and the individual plays an instrumental role to solve any kind of problem; hence, it is also a must for both of them to get together for solving the problem of the low quality of living in the cities.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, hence, if, may, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, kind of, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 63.0 41.998997996 150% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1808.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05027932961 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95788939005 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.54469273743 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 569.7 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 39.0 20.2975951904 192% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.8973505666 49.4020404114 170% => OK
Chars per sentence: 200.888888889 106.682146367 188% => OK
Words per sentence: 39.7777777778 20.7667163134 192% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.5555555556 7.06120827912 192% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12362323553 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0538311641378 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0331848321718 0.0667982634062 50% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0771745494719 0.151304729494 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0415785187109 0.056905535591 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.2 13.0946893788 170% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 31.89 50.2224549098 63% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.67 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 17.6 10.1190380762 174% => OK
text_standard: 20.0 10.7795591182 186% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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