In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message?
It is believed in some cultures that anything can be attained if children put their lots of efforts. This essay thinks that the benefits of telling them about this notion outweigh the drawbacks as this above opinion can encourage to them to chase their dreams otherwise it has negative consequences.
On the one side, encouraging youngsters to do work hard is advantageous for their future. Since children have numerous dreams at their early age and they feel that everything is possible. If elders motivate them to pursue their dreams and believe in them, it will push them to become the best version of themselves. For example, Tiger Shroff, the famous Bollywood actor and dancer, his father was not only used teach dance steps, but he also practices with him hourly. This is to say that such kind of encouragement makes children mentally strong and confident. In this way they ill never give up and will stay positive.
On the other side, children put themselves into problems as they start living fantasy life, they become day dreamer. Due to believing that everything is possible, sometimes they set unrealistic goals which are hard to be fulfilled. For instance, young one thinks that he or she would be millionaire at the age of fifteen. When they reach at that age, they become frustrated and suffer many diseases like depression, anxiety and isolation.
To conclude, although it is beneficial to tell children that working hard towards your goals, it puts some negative impacts like frustration and burnout.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 24.0651302605 179% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1275.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0395256917 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6103599913 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 385.2 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.5579009882 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.0769230769 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.4615384615 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.07692307692 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.273395112725 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0961408932058 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0648636644177 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156804527737 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0279160633217 0.056905535591 49% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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