Making one to one connection with subordunates is good practise which helps to acheive target within short period of term. However, there is lot of disadvantages over fewer amount of advantage
To begin, though the continious relationship with employes makes an employer properly informed about his/her organization but it creats dissatisfaction amongs the workers. For example, a big portion of subordinates want to maintain proper decipline in there life like they try to spend some quality time with family after there office period which helps to build up good tie with family members. at that time they will feel occured if there employe try to be connected with them.
Secondly, continious working mentality might decrese the positive intention of employe's that after certain period of time the outcomes of subordibates would decrese gradually.
Despite of having temporary benifits of discrete working practise, at the end of the day there is a lot of possibilities for having mistakes on accomplished tasks.
Without having proper leisure time after office period decrease the innovation capability which would effect an onganisation greatly
In conclusion, it is necessary to give some refreshment on brain doing some social as well as family activities on holiday or in weekend which will help to operate human soul uninturruptly for rest of the working period. It seems like notorious for organistion but eventually any company or a sector would receive best result.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in short, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1252.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 233.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.37339055794 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90696013833 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8816858212 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 145.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.622317596567 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 83.6995183678 49.4020404114 169% => OK
Chars per sentence: 156.5 106.682146367 147% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.125 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252632984271 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106341211434 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0743798620403 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100529604504 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0741423560342 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 13.0946893788 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.46 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.09 8.58950901804 117% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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