Some parents buy their children a large number of toys to play with.
What are the advantages and disadvantages for the child of having a large number of toys?
It is claimed that nowadays some parents purchase miscellaneous playthings for their offspring. Now it is an all fire debate whether this phenomenon do more good or harm?
Nowadays in many families both parent work outside to provide a decent life for their children as a result they don’t have enough time to spend with them engage a play, so, they buy more toys and tools to fill this blank. In one hand having a lot of plaything can help and speed child’s recognition of surrounding, name of animals and colors, eye-hand coordination to new a few. In addition, let’s not forget the simple joy of playing.
However, like other things too many of toys can be dangerous and detrimental. First of all, as it is many toys and dolls made of plastic which contains chemical and poisonous substance can wreak a havoc with infants and young children. Secondly, having many toy and doll and reaching to whatever you ask can spoil and ruin a growing child’s character and psyche as they get used to be doted by everyone. Finally, if a child provided to having a lot more possession than his or her peer can be envied and be bullied by his or her classmate. as a result, it is going to lead to low self-esteem and confidence in rest of his/her life.
All in all, there is no exact answer to the question whether advantages of having a lot of playthings outnumber it’s disadvantages or not? But obviously it is every parent’s duty to consult to their trusted expert a long this issue to prevent any unwanted harm.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 246, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun plaything seems to be countable; consider using: 'a lot of playthings'.
Suggestion: a lot of playthings
... to fill this blank. In one hand having a lot of plaything can help and speed child's recogni...
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Line 3, column 379, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[5]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'used to being'.
Suggestion: used to being
...apos;s character and psyche as they get used to be doted by everyone. Finally, if a child ...
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Line 3, column 545, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: As
...and be bullied by his or her classmate. as a result, it is going to lead to low se...
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Line 4, column 41, Rule ID: WHETHER[5]
Message: Can you shorten this phrase to just 'whether', or rephrase the sentence to avoid "the question"?
Suggestion: whether
...All in all, there is no exact answer to the question whether advantages of having a lot of playthin...
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Line 4, column 75, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...er to the question whether advantages of having a lot of playthings outnumber it&...
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Discourse Markers used:
['but', 'finally', 'first', 'however', 'if', 'second', 'secondly', 'so', 'in addition', 'as a result', 'first of all']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.217665615142 0.247107183377 88% => OK
Verbs: 0.173501577287 0.155533422707 112% => OK
Adjectives: 0.0851735015773 0.0946595960268 90% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0315457413249 0.0501214627716 63% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0599369085174 0.0437548338989 137% => Less pronouns wanted. Try not to use 'you, I, they, he...' as the subject of a sentence
Prepositions: 0.107255520505 0.122226691241 88% => OK
Participles: 0.0567823343849 0.0403226058552 141% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.78066269943 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0410094637224 0.0326793684256 125% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0820189274448 0.0861772015684 95% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0157728706625 0.021408717616 74% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.00315457413249 0.011925033212 26% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1536.0 1933.35771543 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 316.048096192 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.68888888889 6.12580529183 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20517956788 96% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.307407407407 0.374742101984 82% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.240740740741 0.28420135186 85% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.177777777778 0.203846283523 87% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.118518518519 0.137316102897 86% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78066269943 2.80594681477 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.037074148 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.62962962963 0.56093040696 112% => OK
Word variations: 70.5112756767 60.7387585426 116% => OK
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0891783567 75% => OK
Sentence length: 22.5 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.7472518503 49.517814964 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.0 127.492653851 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5 20.7743622355 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 0.916666666667 0.814263465372 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38877755511 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 3.99599198397 125% => OK
Readability: 46.5740740741 49.1944974215 95% => OK
Elegance: 1.44047619048 1.69124875643 85% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.331090333119 0.332605444948 100% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.126195057364 0.102741220458 123% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0636654417942 0.0668466124924 95% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.586681580311 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.0951055723271 0.148594505496 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.130669031395 0.134430193775 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0670687168426 0.0742795772207 90% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.204389962199 0.324371583561 63% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.132360164332 0.0638462369009 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.19355450763 0.228012699653 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0870511880274 0.058150111329 150% => OK
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.68436873747 46% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.41683366733 29% => OK
Positive topic words: 2.0 5.90881763527 34% => OK
Negative topic words: 4.0 2.5751503006 155% => OK
Neutral topic words: 1.0 1.9629258517 51% => OK
Total topic words: 7.0 10.4468937876 67% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: This is not the final score. The e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.