Some people believe the aim of university education is to help graduates get better jobs. Others believe there are much wider benefits of university education for both individuals and society.
Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Literacy rate places a crucial factor in deciding the future of the country. While people who advocate on university education argue that it helps in getting a secure job, on the other hand, others defend that the education is not merely for securing jobs, it has a great purpose.
It is undeniable fact that a degree from a university will improve once prospects in the job world. The jobs in the current world are highly demanding in nature, technical expertise is a must in order to thrive in the job, because of this lot of employers are looking for people of specific background in education and universities are the pool of such resources. For instance, a degree with a computer background will help in getting a job in the software industry and it is a win-win situation for the employer and the employee. It gives immense confidence in attending interviews and thus helping for a secure future.
On the other hand, the purpose of education is well besides job it helps in looking at the world from a different perspective and to help the society in solving the day to day challenges. This not only makes a better future but also helps in individual growth. For instance, Ritesh Sharma a young entrepreneur and CEO of OYO had solved the problem of how to make hotels affordable to masses, by creating a chain of hotels by leasing buildings of common people. It not only revolutionized the hotel industry but also helped people in booking hotel at reasonable prices. This shows the power of education in making the world heaven by solving real-world challenges.
In conclusion, though for many the basic purpose of education is to secure a job; there are many advantages besides that it helped in solving many issues that people are facing day to day life and thus helping the society and growing as an individual.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, so, thus, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.77287066246 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70164182172 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.488958990536 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.2501572325 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.083333333 106.682146367 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.4166666667 20.7667163134 127% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.218308064465 0.244688304435 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0824639373248 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0638251138053 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143202643925 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518323764421 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 50.2224549098 107% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.68 12.4159519038 86% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.66 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.