Some people think that in the modern world we are more dependent on each other, while others think that people have become more independent.
Discuss both views and give your own opinion. your opinion.
people mindset is changing at a very fast pace and is in the process of reinventing themselves in order to cope with the changing world. In the process, some people believe, that we are overly depending on others, while others argue that we became more independent with the relative comparison to past. Let's explore both perspectives before forming an opinion.
it is undeniable fact, that "no man is an island", we cannot achieve everything by ourselves. The rationale is simple, the human race is evolved in the process of helping each other in every endeavour. Even in the modern world, with unimaginable inventions of mankind, we still fear of bereavement and grieve for the loss this shows how attached people; increase in dependency on one another. Furthermore, in the busy world, as everyone is working and as the jobs have become more specific we don't have a choice other than to co-operate each other. For instance, we are depending on parents or relatives to look after our children, in the same way, we are depending on cook for food. Thus the notion, we are increasingly depending on each other still holds true.
On the other hand, when compared to the past we became more autonomous and less dependent; where technology is in the centre of this metamorphosis. With the evolution of technology, things got changed drastically and everything is available on the reach of hand. Machines become human replicas, they are like bots helping us in every way of life. For instance, in past to go to a place or to know about something we used to reach out to people who experienced it, but now we can search everything on the internet and know about it and smartphones take it to next rung. Therefore, the belief we are more independent in comparison to the past.
To conclude, in my opinion, human dependency is decreased to a great extent and this trend will increase significantly with the advancement of science and technology.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, if, look, so, still, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in my opinion, in the same way, on the other hand, to a great extent
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1629.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90662650602 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86953675383 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.548192771084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.0597627848 49.4020404114 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.6 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1333333333 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.66666666667 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.295505283495 0.244688304435 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0947457167349 0.084324248473 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.071325838662 0.0667982634062 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164998875069 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0761775263438 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 13.0946893788 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.