Some people believe that the best way to spend a holiday in a foreign country is to go out to meet people instead of staying in the hotel most of the time. what is your opinion? give reasons and include relevant examples from your own experience.
International traveling has become intensive and easy in today's routine life due to several reasons of business, social, educational,personal interest and so on. Many people believe that one should spend their time by going out rather sitting in the hotel room. My inclination supports the thought due to an array of reasons which can be elaborated as follows.
To commence with, going out can help to explore the horizon of different aspects of the location. Roaming hither & thither in the foreign country will not only help to connect with the people but also help to gather knowledge of a various field of that place like history, geography, landscape, weather and so on. Traveling out can surely quench the thirst of the people who thrive for the knowledge of various part of the world. Moreover, visiting and understanding alluring landscapes of the abroad location can motivate the artist of the different field for their innovative creations. What is more, communicating with local people can help to build up the global network which ultimately provides a common platform to connect globally to create a global culture.
On the other hand, People have different sets of traits and choices. Some people like to explore the world while others like to rejuvenate themselves from within. By understanding this need, many people like to stay in the hotel rooms to get relax and refresh from the routine stress. Moreover, nowadays most hotels are providing a set of amenities for the recreation of their guest aboard. For instance, hotels arrange folk dance,cultural activities, food festivals , indoor games like golf,swimming and other spiritual activities like yoga,spa and so on. These activities keep their guest busy and fresh simultaneously. Finally, sometimes the purpose of the traveling is the search of peace and to be isolated from the outer world which holds people to stay in the hotel room in place of roaming out.
All in all, the way of spending time is the matter of choice of an individual. However, I strongly believe in acquiring as much as possible from the strange country to be familier with it in place of staying back at a hotel room.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, however, if, moreover, so, while, for instance, what is more, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1814.0 1615.20841683 112% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05292479109 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81612430273 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 199.0 176.041082164 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554317548747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1355792901 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.705882353 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.1176470588 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.82352941176 7.06120827912 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.22677555614 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723765229409 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0564825161631 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13558430547 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0232662066939 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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